Narrative Writing

Once upon a time, there was a mermaid named Ava. She was swimming to go find
some food when she found some food that she wanted. She turned around and she
couldn't find the way home. So she just keeps on swimming until she finds her way
home. 

 But then she got tired so she looked for a rock and went to sleep on the rock.
When she woke up she was not on the rock she was in a dark place she stood up
and she went for a swim in the house . But she still didn't know where she was
so she tried and tried to find her way out but then she got very tired so she just
sat down. A few days later she was very tired and hungry but she remembered she
had some food with her. 

So she swam up to that room she was in and she was very happy because she
was eating. While she was eating the food the door shut and she was very scared
at the time when the door shut by itself. When the door shut she tried to open the
window. She couldn't open the window. So she tried looking for something and pushing
the walls but there was a ladder there and she did the ladder and she climbed on it
because there was a window. She opened the window and she was free!!! When she
got out she went and she didn't ever want to go to sleep again.