First Day In Term 4

Kia Kaha Te Reo Maori

Narrative Writing

PART 1:Far far away there was a happy volcano and a whale splashing in the nice water.. The happy volcano was erupting and he was on an island filled with lots of trees around him and big branches and flowers making the volcano nice and warm. Around the volcano there were pretty things around him and even the sky was a nice blue sky making his flowers and trees smell nice. The volcano had a very  weird shape and he looked very old. Also there were some very fluffy  clouds floating around while the whale was jumping up.

PART:2 Suddenly the volcano looked very sad. There weren't any whales around

him and any whales around the volcano. The  volcano exploited some gas

that came out of the volcano. The volcano erupted very loud and everything

moved and then suddenly the water was getting higher and the volcano was

getting smaller because the water was getting higher.. When the volcano

erupted sadly there weren't any animals like the birds and even the whale wasn't

splashing in the water or anything near the volcano and then the volcano felt very

sad and lonely because there weren't  any animals near him and making him smile.

PART 3:On the same day as it was getting very dark the volcano was still sad until he heard something near it. When the volcano was looking he noticed that something was growing so he felt something on him and he saw this black thing with him. The volcano didn’t care cause he thought it was sewed even though the sewed is green. He noticed that it wasn't going away and instead of sewed  it was hair. He yelled very loudly “I’m a girl” then everything changed. She had a chawline that was perfect and she got very skinny and didn’t have a weird looking shape. She was sad because she lost her friends and lost her family. That's why she was smiling when the whales were splashing in the water. The next day she got very big and she even exploited again and all the sand or ash came up. When the volcano erupted she noticed that the water was getting smaller and she could see her beautiful trees and flowers. Even the whales came back splashing.

Six Sentences

1.Once upon a time there lived a girl named Riley.She lived in America and she went to the beach. Her talent was swimming. On a hot sunny day Riley went down to the beach and went to go surfing by herself because she didn't have any friends. When she finished surfing she went to a special place where you can go and eat ( so basically a restaurants)

2.When she went inside the restaurants. She saw lots of people in there so she went to go sit on the table. She felt so lonely so she called her mother to come and eat with her. Riley stayed there for about 3 minutes to 4 minutes but that wasn’t that long. Then Riley was her mom so she called her over to come and sit down with her.

3.When Riley and her mother sat down they wanted to order. So

in their menu there were refreshing drinks they had. Water,Juice,

Smoothie,and soft drinks.

So Riley ordered a fanta

soft drink and her mother ordered juice.

Then for their plate of

food in the menu there was a junior cheese

burger with some curly fries,a pizza,spaghetti with meatballs.

4.So Riley ordered a junior cheeseburger with curly fries and Riley's mom ordered the same thing as Riley. When they had ordered their order they were just talking about Riley getting friends.Then their order cam and they just kept on eating. Then it was their dessert time they had chocolate cake with chocolate ice cream,A plain vanilla cupcake with a strawberry milkshake. When they ordered they went home.

5.The next morning Riley went back to the beach and went for

a surf. When she was surfing Riley did some awesome surfing

skills so these girls went up to her and told Riley to hang out

with them. So on that day Riley went out with them . Then

when they all finished doing their things she went back home.

When she worked up she felt very happy and glad so her and her

new friends hanged out everyday.

6.When Riley hung out with her friends a lot she was

very

happy that she had lots of friends.

Riley had a very happy life  and she was so proud that

she had friends. Riley never wanted to have no friends because

when she had no friends she was all sad. But now she has

friends. She is very happy and she just keeps on smiling.

How to Respect others

Have you ever thought about respecting others? Well today I am going to tell you all about looking after our school.

So today I am going to tell you guys how to respect others. How you can respect others is when they are lonely you could go ask them to come play with you.Another word for respecting others is to be kind to them. What I mean by being kind is when they need something and they don’t know where it is  you could always go get it for them.

Also by being kind is to respect them and always ask them if they need help but make sure you don’t do it you just show them how to do it. Another way to respect them is by not making fun of them and not teasing them.You have to respect other people's property as well.Also never take anything if it isn’t yours also give it back to them.

Finally you have to always respect them with kindness and always respect them even though you might not talk to them or you might not know them. Being respectful is always having fun with them and being respectful to them.

So today I have written how to respect others and by respecting others you have to be

kind to them and not give them ugly things and give them looks to them,

always smile at them or just say Hi. 

I want to know how do you respect others?? 

And what do you do to respect them??

Guest Speckers

Explanation Writing.

Ketchup fried cereal is KFC which is what you eat like chicken, Gravy, Chips, salad, Burgers, Drinks,coleslaw and lots of junk food. KFC is a yummy food that you can eat and it is where mostly people go eat. coleslaw.

When my family goes to go KFC they always I mean always get wicked wings. Sometimes my dad goes to McDonald and get a mate hunger buster. Sometimes when my dad gets hungry my mum goes to KFC and bye him a spicy chicken and not spicy chicken and a fan ta drink. Also we get KFC for a celebration.

Writing about Mr Moran and Mr Goodwin

Going to the creek.

Now that you have made a plan, it is time to write your recount in full sentence. On Monday the 15th of February we  were walking to creek. When we got there there were rubbish and duck and more rubbish and it was stinking and smelling. The color for the water is black. We walked to creek and then we stand up and to see what was in the water.After that we sat down and we had to listen to the teacher. We lined up with Mrs Buchanan and Mrs Buchanan took a photo of us with her phone. Later on

We lined up with Mrs Buchanan. Also Mrs Buchanan took a photo of us with her phone.

After when Mrs Buchanan took a photo of us we started to line up to came back to our class  and then we went on our Chromebook and we started to write about it. We  were walking to class and we came to our class and then we came to sat down again and we had to listen to Mrs buchanan. When Mrs Buchanan  finished talking she told us to get our chrome book and start our writing.

My Astronaut Suitcase

HI this is my suitcase to go out of space and this is what i need if i go out of space.

My Matariki writing

First of all We had to go and line up for assembly and Kauri Flats School came to our school and  they were talking about flounder.

Next  When kauri flats school finished talking about flounder some of the kapa haka had to go on the stage and dance and sing.

After that  when all the  kapa haka finished there thing we had to go back to our class and get our bag and sit down so our teacher can do the roll and we all split into group for matariki.

Later on We had to get like a sticker from miss  Buchanan and we had to go to that class that was on the sticker.

In the end We all had to go to the hall but in our class and we were just watching some video and then the bell ringed and that was for home time.

Brooklyn and i finding our way to the office

So if a visitor comes and says where can  I find the office you can tell him or her.

1. Walk out of the door.
2. Walk straight until you get to the red doors.  Walk through the doors and along the corridor we call the breeze.
3. Turn left into another corridor at the end of the hall.
4. Walk straight until you see the office counter.

And that's how you find our destination to the office.

Other ways of saying ... said

My Year 5 Mihi

A story about a bird.

Once upon a time the big  brown bird was flapping his wings to find some food for his family. Suddenly the big bird heard a sound because he was standing on the cliff and the big bird flapped his wings so he didn't fall on the ground. After when he got up the big bird went to go and sit on a rock and his stomach made a noise and he didn’t find any food  so he went in the the sea and he saw a fish and he ate some of the fish . The big bird  was so bored and he went home to see his mum and his dad. The next day the big bird woke up and he  rushed down to the kitchen to see if there was some food and then he look at the fridge and there were inset but it was died and there was bread and there was some water and he found some fish he ate all of it and mum and dad woke up and they look in the fridge  and they didn't see any food so big bird hide the fish and mum and dad said to big bird did you eat the fish said mum and dad big bird said nope i haven't seen them . There house  was made of rocks and some leafs and also some paper.

Year 5/6 Camp

On Wednesday the 8th of February. We were doing it at school because What camp mean it is like a true adventure but you have to get your  tent ready so you can sleep in it. What I watched was the movie Storks at camp.

My best highlight is about mine is the Dessert  and I like free time . Why I  choose free time and dessert. I chose desserts  because  we had ice cream and Peaches and Sprinklers. Also i chose free time because we can play on the little tramp and the roller blades, basketball, scooters, skateboards.

I  struggled because I thought that I was sleeping at my house. Also I struggled  sleeping in the tent because it was quite small.

Camping in Rainbow Land