Narrative Writing

PART 1:Far far away there was a happy volcano and a whale splashing in the nice water.. The happy volcano was erupting and he was on an island filled with lots of trees around him and big branches and flowers making the volcano nice and warm. Around the volcano there were pretty things around him and even the sky was a nice blue sky making his flowers and trees smell nice. The volcano had a very  weird shape and he looked very old. Also there were some very fluffy  clouds floating around while the whale was jumping up.

PART:2 Suddenly the volcano looked very sad. There weren't any whales around

him and any whales around the volcano. The  volcano exploited some gas

that came out of the volcano. The volcano erupted very loud and everything

moved and then suddenly the water was getting higher and the volcano was

getting smaller because the water was getting higher.. When the volcano

erupted sadly there weren't any animals like the birds and even the whale wasn't

splashing in the water or anything near the volcano and then the volcano felt very

sad and lonely because there weren't  any animals near him and making him smile.

PART 3:On the same day as it was getting very dark the volcano was still sad until he heard something near it. When the volcano was looking he noticed that something was growing so he felt something on him and he saw this black thing with him. The volcano didn’t care cause he thought it was sewed even though the sewed is green. He noticed that it wasn't going away and instead of sewed  it was hair. He yelled very loudly “I’m a girl” then everything changed. She had a chawline that was perfect and she got very skinny and didn’t have a weird looking shape. She was sad because she lost her friends and lost her family. That's why she was smiling when the whales were splashing in the water. The next day she got very big and she even exploited again and all the sand or ash came up. When the volcano erupted she noticed that the water was getting smaller and she could see her beautiful trees and flowers. Even the whales came back splashing.